Rock Cycle and Theory of Plate Tectonics, Peer Feedback!

12/12/2011

Hello and this is my first comment on my blog. Please post a question/comment that you have about my research on my website! If you have noticed I need to include some more information on one of my sections, feel free to let me know! Any positive feedback i will appreciate. Any unappropriate language is not tolerated! Thanks

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Ammit the Devourer

12/12/2011 13:17

Remember, you need to space after you punctuate.

Ammit the Devourer

12/12/2011 13:20

Make sure you go through all of your pages. Some have spelling mistakes. You should read through it with a family member, or a friend.

Pooh Bear

12/12/2011 13:21

Hi Sandy!
I think you really did a good job on your rock cycle section. Something I thought you could improve on is punctuation, and remember when there is a period at the end of a sentence you put a space in between. Also try to do your best for the bibliography format.
Other than that I think you did a great job!! :)

Ammit the Devourer

12/12/2011 13:24

I thought you did a really good job wit putting information in your own words. I thought it was very clean, and the language was understandable. Great job!
P.S. This Plates of the lithosphere needs to be moved.

Pooh Bear

12/12/2011 13:28

Hi again! In your plate tectonics section I looked at both of your bibliography's and both of them don't have the credit you have to give for the information you got from the websites and books you researched from.

Greg Heffley

12/12/2011 13:29

I thought the clean look on your website is awesome! I really like the green! And your information is very good!

Greg Heffley

12/12/2011 13:44

Hi again! I thought on the crust when you put the continential and oceanic crust research was really cool! Because not everyone put both type of crusts!

Conan

12/12/2011 18:27

Hi! I really like your website. For Plate Tectonics, you should put more details and change the words to simple words so, the audiences would know.
Also, for the Rock Cycle, you need to put the website addresses on the Bibliography page.

sandy squirrel

12/12/2011 21:50

@Everyone, Thank you so much for such positive feedback! And for the helpful tips I will most definately use them! Thanks Again! :D

Mr. Hong

12/13/2011 21:48

@ Sandy - You should give each blog post a title. This one should be 'ROCK CYCLE & THEORY OF PLATE TECTONICS'

sandy

09/02/2012 20:21

Oops! I changed it a long time ago, I just never got to commenting. Thanks for the feedback! :)

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